I am Alondra Ibarra
I like to think of myself as little but mighty
I am hard working when i want to be
And I always stay humble
I am thoughtful and respectful
I like to try my hardest
Even when the people that surround me don't
But I sometimes wonder if
This is me
I really like how you listed each thing about yourself and it flowed smoothly. Plus you made your poem straight to the point. Also, I personally think the title fit really well with you using first person through the whole thing.
ReplyDeleteI think its great how you keep the courage to stay true to yourself even though you are small compared to others. Through the poem you express yourself to be humble yet powerful in your own way, like every woman should be. Even though people surround you dont, you always fight through the negativity and do your best. This is great, small but powerful poem and I really liked it.
ReplyDeleteSometimes you wonder if this is you because the little but mighty is a fense you put up so noone can get to you. writing like this helps you finally be able to say these things without fear. so keep writing. and keep it up! great job.
ReplyDeleteYour poem describes the person you are, you really knew what you were going for. i liked how you said you try your best even tho people surrounded you think you don't . i can identify with that piece of sentence.
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